I'll start by saying thank you for asking me to critique your work, not many people do that Right, vision wise it is clearly too good an opportunity for you to have passed on, and you pulled the idea off perfectly. 5/5 Originality wise, it could be considered a safe bet, a Nightmare Night themed vector using both Princess Luna and a Pumpkin, but I have seen surprisingly little of it so far. 4.5/5 Your technique is pretty solid. I am not sure how much vectoring you have done in the past, but this looks pretty good. There are a few points, particularly in the mane and tail, where the lines are a little wobbly, or otherwise not perfect (which is only a minor criticism in reality), and perhaps the eyes are could use a tiny bit more attention. Otherwise I can't really fault your technique. All in all a well executed technique. 4.5/5 For the impact, I personally find the image to be amusing, and Luna looks pretty darn adorable right there, so that gets a good 4.5/5 from me. Overall I'd give this piece a 4.5/5, and a personal thumbs up from me
Right, vision wise it is clearly too good an opportunity for you to have passed on, and you pulled the idea off perfectly. 5/5
Originality wise, it could be considered a safe bet, a Nightmare Night themed vector using both Princess Luna and a Pumpkin, but I have seen surprisingly little of it so far. 4.5/5
Your technique is pretty solid. I am not sure how much vectoring you have done in the past, but this looks pretty good. There are a few points, particularly in the mane and tail, where the lines are a little wobbly, or otherwise not perfect (which is only a minor criticism in reality), and perhaps the eyes are could use a tiny bit more attention. Otherwise I can't really fault your technique. All in all a well executed technique. 4.5/5
For the impact, I personally find the image to be amusing, and Luna looks pretty darn adorable right there, so that gets a good 4.5/5 from me.
Overall I'd give this piece a 4.5/5, and a personal thumbs up from me
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